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发表于 2017-8-2 14:22:03 | 显示全部楼层
最近新写了一篇作文,感觉还不错~~但是还是想找老师帮忙看看,求罩求批改

Nowadays, in order to enhance the popularity of the universities, universities would like choose to hire more professors  Whether this measure is more effective compared with upgrading campus facilities has drawn a wide attention. As far as I am concerned, focusing more on university's facilities is more important, though hiring famous professors is necessary.   
Admittedly, hiring famous professors may have certain benefits. Famous professors usually have more comprehensive and deeper understandings within professional areas, which provides students with introductory backgrounds and specific contents to figure out the theories in textbooks. However, if viewed from a different angle, it also means students have too much to digest. Students might be intimidated by too much reading materials or abysmal jargons and fell reluctant to study. In this case, cultivating students' interests by experiments and other facilities could better improve students' academic performance.   
Initially, improvement in facilities can serve as a catalyst for increasing students' interests. That is to say, advanced facilities make rigid knowledge vivid for students to understand. For example, for engineering students, it is usually the case that the professor will bring students to the laboratory to demonstrate how the theories in books could be transformed into real circuit schematics. Likewise, professors in filming could use softwares, such as Final Cut, iMovies, or so, to direct students how to combine several static pictures into one moving video. Thanks to these teaching facilities, there is a higher chance that students could be impressed by the real demonstrations of experiments or softwares, luring them to act themselves. On the contrary, famous professors might be leading experts in academics, but that does not necessarily ensure that their opinions could be fully delivered to students, which plays little roles for students' s learning.   
Additionally, improvement in facilities could enrich students' campus life. In other words, facilities like gymnasiums, libraries or even food courts could be a complement to academic life. By going to gymnasiums after classes, students are eligible to weightlifting, playing squash, climbing and even basketball, dragging them out of study loads. By going to libraries, students could not only find reference books for their class, but, more importantly, they could browse books outside their major according to individual's interests, such as Jane Austen and Sherlock Holmes. By going to the food court during classes, students are offered by various gourmet food, especially, Spaghetti, Sushi and fried rice, providing students with a healthy and exciting lifestyle.   
To sum up, due to the reasons I list above, I would regard that upgrading university facilities deserves more more focus than hiring famous professors.
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发表于 2017-8-2 14:27:41 | 显示全部楼层

批改结果出来了呦~点击新窗口打开查看高清大图

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发表于 2017-8-22 18:01:21 | 显示全部楼层
下载来看了一眼,资料太全了,不得不佩服啊
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发表于 2017-8-30 16:13:39 | 显示全部楼层
键盘上打出十五字只为能下载资料
这十五字混出来的一点资料容易吗
十五字达到想吐学十五字党不容易
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发表于 2017-9-7 17:27:16 | 显示全部楼层
掩卷沉思,顿觉心里豁亮,茅塞顿开!犹如拿破仑流放琉璃岛读阅孙子兵法 拍案惊奇:早得此卷,岂能败北。此篇称之为救市之做,实不为过啊!此贴资料必须下载保存啊。
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发表于 2017-9-15 16:04:08 | 显示全部楼层
我不说这是什麽百年一见的好贴,“群众的眼睛是雪亮的”“好贴不怕火炼”“是好贴总是会发光的”,我只默默下载资料,我为这样如此精彩的帖子已经做了我应做的一部分。
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